xanthan gum

Nothing is better than wasting my days on you Knowing that some part of me will fade as you become clearer does not sting so much I'm aware that you ...

i agree with timjim, though this was relatively good. i love that you've adopted your own style, though, instead of others. i'm sorry for not having much to say :)

i agree with blackdaisy. the second stanza was lacking the same feeling as the rest of the poem, which can be a good thing or a bad thing, but as ...

this was beautiful. the imagery - the description - wonderful. i liked: But light can’t be solid. Even the brightest star fades away, As that twinkle effervesces from the gentle ...

(pre-apology for horrible critique) i loved this. this was amazing. i think you should fix the line breaks of the last stanza. this is my suggestion: but even then, in ...

this was very cute and touching. i loved the feeling, because it certainly conveys what each and every teenage girl feels at the bitter disappointment. very cold and sort of....just ...

alright, i think you need to tie all these beautiful but slightly incoherent images together more. i had to read it a couple of time to get it, but then ...

The ghost I am afraid of is the kind that unearths dark treasures with forgotten maps. i didn't like this line for some reason. otherwise, i found the entire thing, ...

i loved the vocabulary, but the ending did not match the beauitful imagery of the poem. allow me to be informal and say that it demanded a bit more "ZAP" ...

this was beautiful. i loved your imagery and word-choice, but i must voice a singular critique - your line breaks sometimes confuse me, make me unsure of the start and ...

this was flowly and sort of musical sounding, but i didn't favor the repitition of "tonight" as the last word in the first two stanzas. it was too redundant and, ...

this was cute and held meaning, rhythm and rhyme properly. it even conveyed image. i must say, though... a hand reached out, with not hate, but love after all the ...

A faceless mass All embrossed and branded With the emblem of your king And the beat; the rhythm Smacks and whacks its way around town From the girl with her ...

aww this was so cute. and very true - in fact, you just put the biggest smile on my face. i don't like the hyphen between "no" and "one", though ...

yeah, ok, this needs flesh for me to bite into. right now it's a very short, sweet cracker that is more like a poetic statement with line breaks than a ...